Review of jayy dodd's Mannish Tongues (Platypus Press, 2017)


Hymnal Review of jayy dodd’s Mannish Tongues 

by Logan February
 

In Mannish Tongues, jayy dodd demonstrates a mastery of lyric, and more than that: they fully inhabit language, manipulating it so intimately that every proclamation doubles as a confession. The presence of “tongues” is laid out across the whole book; the speaker's language belongs exclusively to them. One clear instance of this is the persistent capitalization of the word “Black”—a gesture that works to establish blackness as more than just one of many facets of identity & self, as central, fundamental. The profundity goes even deeper—the personal ritual of speaking in “tongues” is essential to the work. In the poem “There's Something bout Being Raised In Church,” the speaker offers some explanation for this; they speak of “learning to walk on holy ground when both [their] / parents were preachers,” a revelation that provides great insight into dodd's poetics. The speaker claims they have been “touched by the most high.” This is what makes Mannish Tongues such a hymnal experience. I have attempted to recreate that experience in the following call-and-response. All italics represent quotes from dodd’s book.
 

Hymn for Black & Body

i first learned sensation singing hymns too close to choirboys

hallelujah. hallelujah.

my first tongues were communion, / the body was sacrifice to be broken

amen. amen.

the most genuine magic my boyish / hands could conjure was a fluke, a phenomenon, one i would be / hard-pressed to manifest again

hallelujah. hallelujah.

When Momma was God, / She blessed me in her image

amen. amen.

this is not a mythology / this is the only story I know

for my body / born of broken earth / into a city breaking & burning

hallelujah. hallelujah.

because Heaven touches Earth / right below my jawline

amen. amen.

I am often caught in the dark, with familiar / failures, hollering at homeboys & / whispering profanities

It’s funny to me how many boys must have pictures like this / allowed / to be soft & pouty before it’s beat out of them

amen. amen.

praise new ways to tell time, / praise not knowing which timezone it is when he calls, / praise him never listening but always wanting to talk

hallelujah. hallelujah.

I believed him when he told me I was the truth / & that I could set him free

I want to call you love, but / only know you as confessional

amen. amen.

Kissing spliffs before familiar / tongues. These are our bodies

my lungs are night-sky- / black & sparkling at their own resilience

hallelujah. hallelujah.

vernacular of bullets coming for the back of your throat

imagine this body beautiful, imagine this Black, / immaculate

amen. amen.

infinite Harambes / infinite African bodies / displaced

infinite niggas / bashing out eulogies / to be taught in school

hallelujah. hallelujah.

the first biographies i learned were eulogies

amen. amen.

infinite footage / on loop on loop on loop on loop on / loop on loop on loop on loop on loop on

hallelujah. hallelujah. hallelujah.

the god of blue / shields & white devils / arms his flock / with noose & / silence

amen. amen.

Some Black boys begin with daily incantation, / you, mourning them quietly

amen. amen.

Black ghosts dwell just outside / of streetlight altar, where // Black & body are unable / to survive the night

hallelujah. hallelujah.

Black ghosts don’t creak the floorboard / nor terrorize dreams, don’t fester // old grudges bout money / never expected to get back

we gather wealth on / dance floors, awaiting / the interstellar possibility of return

amen. amen.

death was always subject / to some sort of resurrection

hallelujah. hallelujah. hallelujah.

Our spirits will whisper / a chorus of victory, every hymn of night-time / & new nations

you will find / yourself: an effigy of stars

amen. amen.

we lived in heaven, so maybe all imagined was possible

ain’t nothing / more real than being alive right now

hallelujah. hallelujah.

every poem, even in its most spectacular excitement, / must know how to finish itself       off

hallelujah. hallelujah.

every poem is masturbation

amen. amen. amen.


Logan February is a happy-ish Nigerian owl who likes pizza & typewriters. He is Co-Editor-In-Chief of The Ellis Review. His work has appeared or is forthcoming in Tinderbox, Wildness, Glass, Bateau, and more. He is author of How to Cook a Ghost (Glass Poetry Press 2017) & Painted Blue with Saltwater (Indolent Books 2018). Say hello on Instagram & Twitter @loganfebruary.